Suggestions on writing in English.

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Principles

Avoid Repetition

Many people consider studying together to be more efficient than studying alone. From my perspective, group study is preferable to studying alone.

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Many people consider studying together to be more efficient than studying alone. I agree with this view and think that group study is preferable for several reasons.

Be formal

avoid using informal or oral words.

Certain Fancy

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No Grammar Errors

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Varying sentence structures(for the opening paragraph)

I understand your concern. You want to avoid repeating the same words or structures in your writing. However, sometimes it is better to use clear and simple language than to force synonyms that may not fit the context or the tone. For example, you could use “how…handle” or “how…manage” instead of “how…deal with”, but they may sound less formal or less appropriate for a pie chart description. You could also use “the methods of…” or “the ways of…” instead of “how…”, but they may sound more wordy or vague.

One way to avoid repetition is to vary the sentence structure or the order of information. For example, you could write:

• “How dangerous waste products are handled in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom is shown in the pie chart.”
• “The pie chart illustrates the different methods of dealing with dangerous waste products in three countries: the Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom.”
• “In the pie chart, the Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom are compared in terms of how they deal with dangerous waste products.”